Re: Can anyone take a quick look at my site?
Hi Concepts,
I agree with Louise. The site looks too busy (too much on the home page, including too many links) and I have no idea what to do once I'm on your site.
In other words you are not giving your visitors clear instructions on what you want them to do next. There is no visible sign up path to engage with you, where do I give you my name and email and what do I get in return?
Are you sure a newsletter is the right fit for your audience do skaters really sit down to read an email you send them in the newsletter format? Maybe a free tip or trick or video of the week would have more appeal?
Your content is great, you certainly offer lots of great info which I think will be appreciated by your viewers.
Good luck!
All the Best,
~Carlos
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